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Please read my poem. I want your opinion?

MAIN Divine Love from a stolen kiss, love from sharp, blue eyes, Love from the well of hearts, love to come up with more lies, I found love in the world, in every nook and cranny, finding love ultimate Simply choose the book to God, That the lamp you, That wash the blood, That you find his love, Believe and ask now, have faith, which is essential, Trust her outstretched hand, the rewards are great that the sentences, the promised land. Also, if you have strong religious beliefs that conflict with mine, so please keep them to yourself. I speak the poem, not its content. All opinions based the poem itself is greatly appreciated.

I love this poem very much. The first stanza, however, needs to be reworked (IMO), because it does not follow the flow of the balance of the poem. Love from a fleeting kiss, Sharp, blue eyes, the [Wells] in the [[heart] s] – like a well in a fruit, perhaps the depth; delete it because it makes the heart away, as if they live alone. Love to come, without lies. S4 L3-4 show that rewards and punishments are were only children who are born in the desert were allowed to enter the land promised except Joshua who never lost faith. Moses could not enter the contrary, he was caught up in the sky. Fourth stanza gives you the opportunity to show the stages of salvation in poetic form because you ask for the faith and confidence – People must know how to find themselves. Good work. Certainly the work on this issue. Christian poets are rare, it is rare that I am asked this way. t

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